he should buy warmer close because there
is so much cold in Calgary and a lot of snow
he had better buy big Boot because he will
need it. he should go to banff .he should go
to skiing because i had a lot of fun when I
did it.he should try snowboarding too.he
should go to Calgary standpede I had lot
of fun there last year.

I'm glad to see you doing your blog again!
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Corrections:
He had better buy big boots because he will
need them.
He should go to the Calgary Stampede; I had lot
of fun there last year.