If I have a million $ I'm gonna do every things in this live. First I will take a tour for every wear.
second i will buy a new house,I think not just one house maybe three or five. Third I will buy new cars,
expansive cars. Fourth I'm gonna do my own business because I want more than one million dollars.
,and I think I'm gonna give my mother and my father some money.I will help the poor people because
they need help from all the people.my live will be better if I have a one million dollars. I think the money
something important in this live.
I think you have a clear plan of what to do with the money! Too many people just waste their money and then don't have anything left after a few years.
ReplyDeleteCorrections: "First, I will take a tour of everywhere." "Fourth, I'm going to make my own business because I want more than one million dollars." ('gonna' is too casual for writing)